DJ Bruno. Ghostwriter. Book critiques. Book submissions.
D.J. Bruno
prides herself on helping authors
create masterful manuscripts. She
has an extraordinary flair for
shaping and directing a work,
while maintaining the natural
voice and style of the author.
Clients have praised her
ability to smooth through rough
patches, detect errors in fact and
consistency, ask the right
questions, and never miss a
deadline. One client recently sent
her a quick note to say "I LOVE
having you around! Thanks!"
D.J. provides a range
of services from expert
proofreading to manuscript
critique, Web content development
and editing, copy editing,
ghostwriting, proposal writing,
and agent contact.
She's edited a range of
material from memoir to erotica,
biography, textbooks, poetry, and
Web content. She specializes in
film and photography, food and
wine, nutrition, travel,
psychology, memoir, and literary
fiction.
Specialties
Copy
Editor, Proofreader,
Developmental Editor
Manuscript Critiques
Non-Fiction: Travel, Creative Nonfiction, Cookbooks, Psychology, Diet/Nutrition, Health, Memoir, Biography, Self-Help, Alternative Medicine
Entertainment: Photography, Film, Art
Poetry & Screenplays
Copyediting Fiction
Gray Marbles and Silvery Salmon by Ken Lang
A
Mere Ache of All by David
Frederick
The
Ancient One by Ilan Herman
Another Day Falling by Dustin
Collins
“Anton”
by Mary Ellen Walsh
Never
Say Never by David Petersen
Restless by Cynthia Boyd
Sleepwalker by Paul Mahan
The
Captain’s Song by Alan Rosenus
Tail
of the Frog by Pamela Alma Bass
Copyediting General/Nonfiction
The Diet Solution Manual by Isabel De Los Rios
Historic Cape Cod Lighthouses: Race
Point by James Claflin
History of Congo by Didier
Gondola
Policy Passages: Career Choices for
Policy Wonks by Howard J. Wiarda
Power
Baby by Ryan Lee Parsons
Sinfully Vegan, 140 Decadent
Desserts to Satisfy Every Vegan’s
Sweet Tooth by Lois Dieterly
Proofreading Fiction
Bear,
a novel by Marian Engel
Human
Parts by Orly Castel-Bloom
A
Love Made out of Nothing/Zohara’s
Journey by Barbara Honingmann
The
Worry Week by Anne Lindbergh
Proofreading Poetry
Archipelago by Rich Rose
Copyediting/Developing Children's Books
The Island of Rouge by Karenann Knotoff
The Writing Curse by Karenann Knotoff
The Canoe by Tara Schleicher
Matt! The Hat! by L.P. Chase
The Corner Man by Patricia Jordan-Cowley
Developmental Editing
Battling the Killer Within by
Thomas Farrington
Manuscript Submission Services
Marketing your manuscript and
contact agents:
Your
initial contact with an agent or
publisher is your first impression;
therefore, it’s crucial that you put
your best foot forward when drafting
a letter.
What I
can do . . .
Read your manuscript and write the
materials required for submitting
to agents and publishers,
including proposals, queries,
synopses, and bios.
Consult with you and edit material
you’ve already written.
Research agents or publishers that
are appropriate for your market,
provide resources, and offer
guidance.
Research the legitimacy of agents
or contacts you’ve already made.
(Don't ever take for granted that
anyone calling themselves an agent
actually is one.)
Prepare your manuscript for
submission—i.e., format according
to industry-standards.
Review and critique the manuscript
to determine if it’s ready for
submission.
Arts
and Entertainment Editor,
Montclarion, Upper Montclair,
NJ, 1/95–4/95
Editor-in-Chief, Four Walls,
Upper Montclair, NJ, 5/93–5/94
Editorial Intern, Boston Rock,
Newton, MA, 5/93–8/93
Feedback
Elliot Stone and the Mystery of the Alien Mom
by L. P. Chase
(Infinity Publishing, November 3, 2004)
When Elliot Stone, a nine-year-old boy, overhears a grown-up telephone conversation, he takes the information out of context and lets his young imagination run away with him. During his encounter with several minor disasters, Elliot displays maturity, bravery, and intelligence while maintaining the innocence and sweetness of a little boy. Parents and children alike will enjoy the suspense and comedy that take Elliot and his friends on this unforgettable mission.
About L. P. Chase: L.P. Chase began writing this book for her children who, being avid readers, complained, "There are no more books in the house to read." Just for fun, she created the character Elliot Stone, and the book took on a life of its own. L.P. Chase has been writing for twenty years and is also the author of I Kiss the Moon, a collection of poetry. She is presently working toward her MSW and resides in Smithtown, New York, with her family.
About D.J. Bruno’s Work: "It was very easy to work with you. Being an amateur, new author, I found that a great quality in you as an editor. You only helped me to grow a little better at writing. For that I say thank you." — L.P. Chase
Historic Cape Cod Lighthouses: Race Point
by James Claflin
(Kenrick A. Claflin & Son)
Historic Cape Cod Lighthouses: Race Point is the third in a series of booklets that tell the story of historic lighthouses and life-saving stations along the New England Coast. Two lighthouses have stood at Race Point on the tip of Cape Cod since the first was lit in 1816. Author James Claflin combines an extensively researched text with his exquisite collection of vintage photographs, many previously unpublished, to tell the story of this important landmark.
Another Day Falling
by Dustin Collins
(1st Books Library, December 1, 2003)
Cameron Callfield has a unique gift for peering into the depths of his own future while he dreams at night. Orphaned by his parents in a car accident several years earlier, Cameron is forced to come to terms with his life as well as his unique gift for dreaming. But not until he attempts to alter his preordained path does the true nature of his ability surface. Another Day Falling is a suspenseful story that delves into the consequences of fate and the awesome responsibility that comes when someone tries to change it.
Reviews: "It flows brilliantly, and I couldn’t put it down once I started." (Review from Amazon.com)
About Dustin Collins: Dustin Collins hails from the same small hometown as best-selling author Larry McMurtry and draws heavily from his experiences growing up in a small town in North Texas. Dustin is a regular contributor to his local newspaper. Another Day Falling is his first novel.
Never Say Never
by David Petersen
(iUniverse, November 2004)
It’s the summer of 1971, and Andy Hanson, a junior high student, lives a quiet, uneventful life in the New York City borough of Staten Island. Now, however, he must confront what was once a simple assumption: who is his friend? A chance encounter with a student, a young man Andy once wrote off as a waste of life, provokes the youngster onto a tumultuous journey.
About David Petersen: David was born on Staten Island. In the fall of 1985, his twin brother was shot and killed at the doorway to his Great Kills apartment. Vowing to do more with his life, he married, moved to Hazlet, New Jersey, fathered three lovely girls and completed this, his first novel.
Battling the Killer Within and Winning: Hopes, Prayers, and Treatments for a Prostate Cancer Cure
by Thomas Farrington
(November 3, 2004)
Men are in a raging battle with prostate cancer with nearly 200,000 in the U.S. alone diagnosed with this disease each year. Each diagnosis brings a sense of fear and hopelessness that must be overcome in order to select the proper treatment. This book is an insightful account of the experiences of the author and 19 other men in treatment with him as they face prostate cancer.
Black Chameleon Memoirs by Montez DeCarlo
(Aventine Press, March 31, 2006)
"Because of you, I know that we have a bestseller on our hands. Thanks a bunch!" — Montez DeCarlo
Reviews: "It is always amazing to learn of the trials and tribulations of successful black men in our society. The author did an outstanding job in capturing my attention and holding it for two days until I finished the book. You now have a fan for life." (Review by Minister F, March 2006)
About Montez DeCarlo: Montez DeCarlo, a Detroit native and coauthor/editor of Our Sacred Identity: The Book of American Indian Names and Their Meanings, makes his novel debut with Black Chameleon Memoirs. As a graduate of the streets and school of hard knocks, Montez has climbed the corporate ladder to director of global networks and IT security for an international pharmaceutical company. He currently mentors troubled teens by sharing his experiences and allowing them to shadow him on the job.
"The
article turned out
amazing! Thanks so
much. I'm so happy
with your work!"— Krissy Brady, Editor, Brady Magazine
"If
D.J. is an example of
the type of people
nSight hires, then I
am confident that you
have provided me with
a good team." — Robert
Siek, Assistant
Editor, Prentice Hall
"Thank you for your
help … your advice was
used throughout the
manuscript … things I
could strike, add,
rearrange, and so
forth. Thanks again
for all you do.
Keeping us writers on
our toes is a big
job." — David
Frederick, Fiction
Author
"Thanks
for your support and
congratulations on
making a living
utilizing your talent
and skills by
doing work you enjoy."
— Ilan Herman, Fiction
Author
"D.J. Bruno performed
the final editing for
this book. Her insight
transformed my work
into a finished
product for which I am
thankful." — Tom
Farrington, Author of Battling the Killer
Within
“I don't know what I
would do without you!
Thanks!” — Rita
Guastella, Director of
Communications,
Project Bread—The
Walk for Hunger
“I recommend her as an
efficient and
effective copyeditor.”
— Karen Cheng,
Associate Project
Manager, Argosy
Publishing
“I found D.J. both
easy to work with and
conscientious about
her deadlines.” —
Kathleen Byrne,
Project Manager,
Argosy Publishing
“Her work is
exceptionally
thorough. She has
provided first-class
editorial services.”— Stephanie DeGonzalez,
Project Manager,
nSight
“Thanks for your
flexibility, great
attitude, and hard
work. It was a
pleasure working with
you on this project.”
— Sarah Yezzi, Senior
Technical Editor,
Prentice Hall
“Your comments were
nuanced, insightful,
authoritative without
being dictatorial. ... I felt as I was
reading your comments
that it was in good
hands, that I was
happy that you had
read it, that I was
better off that you
did.” — Thomas Finn,
Author of short
fiction pieces
“Thanks for your words
of encouragement and
advice. They are very
helpful and
appreciated. I know I
hired the “write”
editor for the job . .
. No pun intended of
course :)” — Tina
Kotulski, Memoir
Writer
"I can’t thank you
enough. The
information you have
given me is so
valuable. I plan to
utilize that website
immediately. . . . The
world needs more
people like you who
are talented,
dedicated to the art,
and willing to share
that knowledge to help
others.” — L.P. Chase, Poet and
Writer
"I’m very impressed by your editing skills. Your response was so much more cogent and helpful than I’d hoped for. I think you have the ideal combo of nit-pick and big-picture." — Lois Taylor, Fiction Author
"Your quick turn around time is amazing! Thanks again for all of your help." — Charles Long, Fiction Author
"Thank you, thank you, and thank you. Your critique really hit home. I loved your comments . . . . ‘Don’t hold the reader’s hand,’ ‘Trust your audience’ and, my favorite, ‘Oh please, let’s not go into the fish’s head.’ (I still chuckle when I read that one.) But with all seriousness, that is what I needed. Those comments helped . . . redirect me. I really appreciated your common-sense views." — Ken Lang, Fiction Author
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