MARK ORRIN, M.A., Johns Hopkins (Teaching Fellow, 1971), has authored seventeen published books, scores of articles and poems, and taught writing on college and university levels. A seasoned publications editor, he has also mentored numerous successful American and international authors and poets. During a career in fund raising, Mark was considered one of America’s leading copywriters, copy chiefs and creative/strategic consultants. He has been listed in Who’s Who In the West, Who’s Who In America, Who’s Who In Entertainment and The Dictionary of International Biography.
“Throughout our work and rework on my manuscript, Mark was encouraging and kind, and he never made me feel like the rookie I am (was). He never left me feeling like he knew more about the publishing industry than I did – he just continued to teach me in an incredibly thoughtful and gentle way, fine-tuning my work and imploring me to be the best I could be. … At the moment there are ten agencies and two publishers who have responded favorably to my query (which you taught me how to write, I might add) about my novel. ” Gary Kaschak
“Writers’ egos, I’m finding out, are very fragile. You have a way about you that’s very soothing on my fragile ego; while you teach and correct the work, you never forget the writer, and that’s a gift. I know you’ve helped me through a lot, and I will tell you honestly: Without your guidance, friendship and patience, I would still be writing only for myself; I’d never have had the guts to take it this far.” – Petra Ruck, fantasy novelist
- Ghostwriting, mentoring, developmental editing, line editing
- Manuscript critiques and evaluations
- Book proposals
- “Self-agenting” your book
- Fiction: science fiction, fantasy, sword-and-sorcery, Westerns, mysteries, adolescent and children’s books, action-suspense
- Non-fiction: memoirs, inspirational, public issues, self-help.
Experience
30+ years mentoring writers. Best endorsements: my “kids” and “grandkids,” who’ve published novels, non-fiction, songs, poetry (I’m a featured poet and a judge of international poetry contests at web sites like www.netpoetry.org and www.thehypertexts.com). Among places my mentorees have published: Doubleday, Zondervan, Algonquin Books, 1st Book Library, Bethany House, Mayapple Press, OCA Press, Open Road Press, AuthorHouse, etc. A real mentor…
Knows how to spot and nurture talent. 1978, began mentoring J. when she was a college frosh; she’s just dedicated third book to me: “for 22 years of nourishing this grateful art-beggar.” Now she mentors writers, too (one mentoree just publ. poems in Atlantic Monthly).
Coaches authors through publishing games. ’80, S.B. asked me, “How’d you get a contract with Doubleday?” Told him; two months later, nailed his own contract; since publ. novels, screenplays, etc.
Knows when NOT to change your work. Read S.S.’s 18 flawless pp.; said, “Just add four words to end”; he since beefed idea into book, published 3/2001.
Knows when mentoring’s done – and tells you. Started M. at 21; today he’s 30, writing full-time (novels, articles, songs, etc.). Any “mentor” who demands to become your lifetime partner’s not for real.
At any given time I’m working with several novelists and helping non-fiction authors shape and finish manuscripts. Florida author I helped with novel, synopsis, proposal/query had the manuscript solicited by Doubleday editor; she later accepted a contract offer for her novel from a publisher outside the United States. Several non-fee-paid agents bidded to represent S.W.’s unfinished first novel – an extremely rare achievement. Using approach methods I guided, K.C., K.D., J.R. and J.P. also secured agent representation for their first novels.
Editing Services
Mentorship; manuscript critiques/evaluations; substantive edit/content development; synopsis, book proposal, query letter composition, review; ghosting; book line-by-line editing; help with “self-agenting” your own work (including “How to Leap Over the Slush Pile”).
Have evaluated, mentored and edited fiction, incl. sci-fi, fantasy, sword-and-sorcery, Westerns, mysteries, adolescent and children’s markets, action-suspense; non-fiction including memoirs, inspirational, public issues, self-help.
Books Published/Edited
Seventeen published books (Doubleday, etc., all not self-published by me, some “for hire”). Most recently, Orrin’s medical mystery-expose, The Chickenpox Vaccine: A New Epidemic of Disease and Corruption, was named a 2007 Indie Excellence Book Awards Finalist and won a Mom’s Choice Foundation 2008 Silver Award (in both cases, for Adult Non-Fiction). In 2008, one Orrin-mentored author’s “Southern gothic” novel was released to stellar reviews by a major publisher; another author’s (first) sci-fi novel was named a 2008 Amazon Breakthrough novel; still another Orrin-mentored author contracted with a rising on-line publisher. Orrin has published poetry, on and off-line, and served as a judge of international poetry contests. His personally authored work comprises “non-fiction novels” (twice Hollywood-optioned), inspirational-motivational, public affairs, all paid-for, to distribution of 2-3 million copies. Wrote just one project “on spec” in past 18 years. Have written countless articles, newsletters, fund raising packages (raised more than $1,500,000,000 for non-profit organizations – fund raising copy esp. can support your “serious” writing habits). Though no “celebrity” writer, he’s earned high five figures writing for 30+ years. Scores of books, articles, newsletters, edited, copy-chiefed. As publications director, mentor-”daddy,” and senior free-lance writer-editor, found, fueled, and freed scores of successful authors.
Mark has authored the brochure titled “Authors! How to Leap the Slush Pile to Non-Subsidy Print” and offers a free copy to each of his clients.
Feedback / Testimonials
“You gave me great feedback that helped me make my story better. Dante’s Journey made the Short List for the 2010 Indie Lit Awards.” – J. C. Marino, speculative fiction author
“Mark Orrin’s evaluation of my ms has been extremely helpful to me and much needed. With his guidance and expertise, I feel much more confident in wrapping up my ‘story.’ It has been a pleasure to work with Mark, and I will continue to do so.” – Bonnie Ward
“Any writer looking for guidance about breaking into print needs a professional mentor he or she can trust. Seventeen years ago, when I was a grad school student, I had the good fortune to find Orrin, the favorite writing professor and renowned poet on campus. Today he is a professional writers’ mentor, and I am a retired literary agent, a national award-winning journalist, author of a best-selling book (Mornings with Fulton Sheen), and an adjunct college professor listed in Who’s Who Among America’s Teachers, 2000. Yet in all I do, I continue to use and pass on Mark’s writing wisdom, including his emphasis on the importance of genuine words of encouragement, candid comments on style and insider tips on getting published, with or without an agent. Whether you are writing for love or money, I wish for you a Mark Orrin. He will help you reach for the stars because he believes that’s what they’re there for. And the day you make your first sale, you’ll know the amazing taste of the stardust that right from the start he’s urged you to seize.” – Beverly Coney Heirich, author, ex-agent, journalist, educator
“Thought you might like to know: I’m doing very well on Amazon in the UK with Future Freaks, my novel we worked on together. Amazon’s just now launching their UK Kindle store, so I was able to get in on the ground floor. That way my book posts higher in customer searches. At this moment, Future Freaks is listed #8 of all Science Fiction books in the UK. I’m in the process of getting the book in its electronic format onto Barnes & Nobles, Apple, Sony and Kobo. Right now it’s available at Amazon, Smashwords and Mobipocket.” – Sheila Reading, science fiction author
“You gave me great feedback that helped me make my story better. Dante’s Journey made the Short List for the 2010 Indie Lit Awards… http://unputdownables.net/2010/12/27/indie-lit-awards-short-lists/ ” – J.C. Marino, speculative fiction author
“With your help, I finished converting my ‘Salat Days’ from a poem (published by Lonzie’s Fried Chicken magazine) into a short story subsequently published by Romantics Quarterly. Before the short story version of ‘Salat Days’ was published, it won Honorable Mention in Writers Digest’s Personal Essay Contest, which was cool, because it’s simultaneously the only short story and the only personal essay I’ve ever actually finished! Thanks so much for your wise counsel, and for the vivid touches you encouraged throughout.” – Michael Burch, corporation CEO, poet, essayist, editor, www.thehypertexts.com (a premier Internet poetry forum)
“I’m thrilled to tell you that I’ve just been offered a wonderfully ‘legit’ publishing deal from a small, well-established Canadian publisher… My re-titled Faith in a Fishbowl should be in print within a few months. Congrats on another mentoring success!” – Jerry Rose, inspirational book author
“Received a book contract today… I am still a bit too shocked to believe it! Also, I wanted to thank you for the suggestions you gave pertaining to the book. Although at first I felt a little ‘protective’ (euphemism J) and only wanted to hear ‘good’ things, when I looked at your comments objectively I saw the great merit in them. I referred to your comments many times in my re-editing process and each time found them very helpful. Thanks!” – Jessica Whittemore, author, Even in Darcey
“Mark, you did it again! You’re the best editor I have ever had the pleasure to work with. It’s indeed an experience and a journey of enlightenment writing with you.” – Robby G. Dixon, author, educator, motivational speaker.
“Writers’ egos, I’m finding out, are very fragile. You have a way about you that’s very soothing on my fragile ego; while you teach and correct the work, you never forget the writer, and that’s a gift. I know you’ve helped me through a lot, and I will tell you honestly: Without your guidance, friendship and patience, I would still be writing only for myself; I’d never have had the guts to take it this far.” – Petra Ruck, fantasy novelist
“Last month I contacted (on your recommendation) my favorite best-selling author via e-mail to ask if she’d mind forwarding information about her agent to me. She didn’t mind, and her agent requested a sample of my work, liked it very much, and now wants to see the full manuscript. Exciting stuff. You should know, too, that part of the sample I sent him was the first chapter, rewritten per your suggestions. (You’re brilliant!) I’ll keep you posted.” – Kathryn Cruise, author, Self-Care Advisor [Ms. Cruise has since secured agent representation for her historical novel.]
“Mark was awesome! Always went the second mile, had great ideas and vastly improved the manuscript.” Later: “Good news: The Tulsa literary agent has begun to shop Beyond Self-Help. Florida-based Strang Communications (Chicken Soup for the Soul series) was one of his first two contacts. The Strang editor responded yesterday, indicating a readiness to negotiate the publishing rights to this book (which she called ‘important’) PLUS my previous, self-published books. Not saying they’re the one, but they perhaps are a good litmus test.” – Cecil Kemp, inspirational author
“Mark had a remarkable way of grasping the conceptual framework of my book as a whole and relating his grasp to every chapter, paragraph and sentence, so his suggestions had significant impacts on the clarity of the entire work. He pointed out areas where adding a brief sentence or clarifying a detail had major affects on the reader’s overall understanding, as well as noticing things that didn’t work. One seemingly simple idea of his had a dramatic impact on the entire book’s readability, as all others I’ve trusted to review the work in progress have concurred. His touch was never intrusive, yet some of his observations and suggestions were so perfect, they at times made me feel as if they’d come from a co-author of my book.” – Mitchell Kalish, New Age/Native American spirituality author
“Update: You helped me learn special techniques for querying publishing house editors directly. I’ve used these methods twice and both times gotten a quick response for manuscript pages. I call that effectiveness and thank you for it. Now I’m thinking I should make sure my manuscript is perfect before submitting it to more editors. So I’m considering engaging you for a full edit (developmental, line-by-line, copy editing) of my 104,000-word heroic fantasy novel.” – Alan Marling, sword-and-sorcery, fantasy author
“Thanks for all your hard work editing the book and ‘coaching’ me; you helped polish this material from a piece of coal to a precious stone.” – Grant Trevithick, author, Quantum Spirituality
“Sacred Seduction has been released to rave reviews, and I am very happy. Your bracketed comments especially [on the manuscript-in-progress] were particularly interesting and helpful. And I could see that you didn’t change my ‘voice’ in your editing.” – Bisi J. Ojediran, novelist, Director, Shell Oil Communications, Nigeria
“A very special thanks to my mentor, Mark Orrin, for not only his passionate editorial input, but also for his steadfast personal love and care.” – Joy Sawyer, author, The Art of the Soul, Dancing to the Heartbeat of Redemption, poet, national poetry therapy leader
“If you hadn’t called me… back in ’91, who knows what turns my life might have taken? Different and far less exciting, that’s for sure. Thanks for being such a faithful friend and mentor. I appreciate you immensely.” – Mark Olsen, novelist, essayist, scriptwriter
“Throughout our work and rework on my manuscript, Mark Orrin was encouraging and kind, and he never made me feel like the rookie I am (was). He never left me feeling like he knew more about the publishing industry than I did – he just continued to teach me in an incredibly thoughtful and gentle way, fine-tuning my work and imploring me to be the best I could be. I told him last week: Even if I never get published, I’ll still feel that the money I spent to work with Mr. Orrin was money well spent. I want all to know that I had a wonderful experience throughout the road Mr. Orrin and I traveled together. I’ll certainly call upon him for my next project. [And later]… I have been aggressively contacting agencies and publishers and need some advice. At the moment there are ten agencies and two publishers who have responded favorably to my query (which you taught me how to write, I might add) about my novel, The Hole to China. If one or more of these responders happen to be interested enough to ask me to contract with them, how should I handle this?” – Gary Kaschak, author
“You’ve excelled yourself; the query/proposal is brilliant. Mark, I am so glad that I picked you. You have shown amazing expertise, in re-ordering my words to make more sense of them, and in showing such empathy for what I’m trying to achieve. I don’t know how to thank you for all your hard work, and I hope this is not the end of our business relationship.” – Mim McKew, Australian memoirist
“Thank you for your masterful work [on a controversial 'non-fiction novel' project]. Hope you are as pleased with the finished product as we are.” – Robert Davies, senior editor, author
“The Tulsa literary agent has begun to shop Beyond Self-Help. Florida-based Strang Communications (Chicken Soup for the Soul series) was one of his first two contacts. The Strang editor responded yesterday, indicating a readiness to negotiate the publishing rights to this book (which she called ‘important’) PLUS my previous, self-published books. Not saying they’re the one, but they perhaps are a good litmus test.” – C. K., inspirational author
“Extremely please with the work, helped me revamp several sections and the end product was a delight to read.” – Gil Burgstede
“Any writer looking for guidance about breaking into print needs a professional mentor he or she can trust. Seventeen years ago, when I was a student in graduate school, I had the good fortune to find Mark Orrin, the favorite writing professor and best poet on campus. Today he is a full-time professional writers’ mentor, and I am a retired literary agent, a national award-winning journalist, author of a best-selling book (Mornings with Fulton Sheen), and an adjunct college professor listed in Who’s Who Among America’s Teachers, 2000. Yet in all I do, I continue to use and pass on Mark’s writing wisdom, including his emphasis on the importance of genuine words of encouragement, candid comments on style and insider tips on getting published, with or without an agent. Whether you are writing for love or money, I wish for you an Mark Orrin. He will help you reach for the stars because he believes that’s what they’re there for. And the day you make your first sale, you’ll know the amazing taste of the stardust that right from the start he’s urged you to seize.” – Beverly Coney Heirich, author, ex-agent, journalist, educator
“With your help, I finished converting my ‘Salat Days’ from a poem (published by Lonzie’s Fried Chicken magazine) into a short story subsequently published by Romantics Quarterly. Before the short story version of ‘Salat Days’ was published, it won Honorable Mention in Writers Digest’s Personal Essay Contest, which was cool, because it’s simultaneously the only short story and the only personal essay I’ve ever actually finished! Thanks so much for your wise counsel, and for the vivid touches you encouraged throughout.” – Michael Burch, corporation CEO, poet, essayist, editor of www.thehypertexts.com (a premier Internet poetry forum)
“I’m thrilled to tell you that I’ve just been offered a wonderfully ‘legit’ publishing deal from a small, well-established Canadian publisher… My re-titled Faith in a Fishbowl should be in print within a few months. Congrats on another mentoring success!” – Jerry Rose, inspirational book author
“Received a book contract today… I am still a bit too shocked to believe it! Also, I wanted to thank you for the suggestions you gave pertaining to the book. Although at first I felt a little ‘protective’ (euphemism J) and only wanted to hear ‘good’ things, when I looked at your comments objectively I saw the great merit in them. I referred to your comments many times in my re-editing process and each time found them very helpful. Thanks!” – Jessica Whittemore, author, even in Darcey
“Writers’ egos, I’m finding out, are very fragile. You have a way about you that’s very soothing on my fragile ego; while you teach and correct the work, you never forget the writer, and that’s a gift. I know you’ve helped me through a lot, and I will tell you honestly: Without your guidance, friendship and patience, I would still be writing only for myself; I’d never have had the guts to take it this far.” – Petra Ruck, fantasy novelist
“Last month I contacted (on your recommendation) my favorite best-selling author via e-mail to ask if she’d mind forwarding information about her agent to me. She didn’t mind, and her agent requested a sample of my work, liked it very much, and now wants to see the full manuscript. Exciting stuff. You should know, too, that part of the sample I sent him was the first chapter, rewritten per your suggestions. (You’re brilliant!) I’ll keep you posted.” – Kathryn Cruise, author, Self Care Advisor [Ms. Cruise has since secured agent representation for her historical novel]
“Thanks for all your hard work editing the book and ‘coaching’ me; you helped polish this material from a piece of coal to a precious stone.” – Grant Trevithick, author, Quantum Spirituality
“Sacred Seduction has been released to rave reviews, and I am very happy. Your bracketed comments especially [on the ms.-in-progress] were particularly interesting and helpful. And I could see that you didn’t change my ‘voice’ in your editing.” – Bisi J. Ojediran, novelist, Director, Shell Oil Communications, Nigeria
“A very special thanks to my mentor, Mark Orrin, for not only his passionate editorial input, but also for his steadfast personal love and care.” – Joy Sawyer, author, The Art of the Soul, Dancing to the Heartbeat of Redemption, poet
“If you hadn’t called me… back in ’91, who knows what turns my life might have taken? Different and far less exciting, that’s for sure. Thanks for being such a faithful friend and mentor. I appreciate you immensely.” – Mark Olsen, novelist, essayist, scriptwriter
“Throughout our work and rework on my manuscript, Mark Orrin was encouraging and kind, and he never made me feel like the rookie I am (was). He never left me feeling like he knew more about the publishing industry than I did — he just continued to teach me in an incredibly thoughtful and gentle way, fine-tuning my work and imploring me to be the best I could be. I told him last week: Even if I never get published, I’ll still feel that the money I spent to work with Mr. Orrin was money well spent. I want all to know that I had a wonderful experience throughout the road Mr. Orrin and I traveled together. I’ll certainly call upon him for my next project. [And later]… I have been aggressively contacting agencies and publishers and need some advice. At the moment there are ten agencies and two publishers who have responded favorably to my query (which you taught me how to write, I might add) about my novel, The Hole to China. If one or more of these responders happen to be interested enough to ask me to contract with them, how should I handle this?” – Gary Kaschak, author
“You’ve excelled yourself; the query/proposal is brilliant. Mark, I am so glad that I picked you. You have shown amazing expertise, in re-ordering my words to make more sense of them, and in showing such empathy for what I’m trying to achieve. I don’t know how to thank you for all your hard work, and I hope this is not the end of our business relationship.” – Mim McKew, Australian memoirist
“Thank you for your masterful work [on a controversial 'non-fiction novel' project]. Hope you are as pleased with the finished product as we are.” – Robert Davies, senior editor, author
“I’ve finally secured representation for Sublime. My agent took my mini-proposal to a conference recently, and the editors of five houses asked to see the full proposal… Keep your fingers crossed.” – John Riggs, Ph.D., author-educator
“The network immediately provided me with several quality editors to select from. The most difficult part was making a selection amongst this impressive group. Nick (the editor I eventually worked with) provided a detailed and honest assessment of my first manuscript. His comments were insightful and while he made clear my novel needed significant work, he was also supportive and made sure to let me know what was working within the story. Based on his comments, I am confident I have gained feedback that will improve the manuscript significantly and move it toward a finer piece of fiction.” (Contact information on request)
BOOK EDITOR REVIEWS
“Any writer looking for guidance about breaking into print needs a professional mentor he or she can trust. Seventeen years ago, when I was a grad school student, I had the good fortune to find Orrin, the favorite writing professor and renowned poet on campus. Today he is a professional writers’ mentor, and I am a retired literary agent, a national award-winning journalist, author of a best-selling book (Mornings with Fulton Sheen), and an adjunct college professor listed in Who’s Who Among America’s Teachers, 2000. Yet in all I do, I continue to use and pass on Mark’s writing wisdom, including his emphasis on the importance of genuine words of encouragement, candid comments on style and insider tips on getting published, with or without an agent. Whether you are writing for love or money, I wish for you a Mark Orrin. He will help you reach for the stars because he believes that’s what they’re there for. And the day you make your first sale, you’ll know the amazing taste of the stardust that right from the start he’s urged you to seize.” – Beverly Coney Heirich, author, ex-agent, journalist, educator
“Thought you might like to know: I’m doing very well on Amazon in the UK with Future Freaks, my novel we worked on together. Amazon’s just now launching their UK Kindle store, so I was able to get in on the ground floor. That way my book posts higher in customer searches. At this moment, Future Freaks is listed #8 of all Science Fiction books in the UK. I’m in the process of getting the book in its electronic format onto Barnes & Nobles, Apple, Sony and Kobo. Right now it’s available at Amazon, Smashwords and Mobipocket.” – Sheila Reading, science fiction author
“You gave me great feedback that helped me make my story better. Dante’s Journey made the Short List for the 2010 Indie Lit Awards… http://unputdownables.net/2010/12/27/indie-lit-awards-short-lists/ ” – J.C. Marino, speculative fiction author
“With your help, I finished converting my ‘Salat Days’ from a poem (published by Lonzie’s Fried Chicken magazine) into a short story subsequently published by Romantics Quarterly. Before the short story version of ‘Salat Days’ was published, it won Honorable Mention in Writers Digest’s Personal Essay Contest, which was cool, because it’s simultaneously the only short story and the only personal essay I’ve ever actually finished! Thanks so much for your wise counsel, and for the vivid touches you encouraged throughout.” – Michael Burch, corporation CEO, poet, essayist, editor, www.thehypertexts.com (a premier Internet poetry forum)
“I’m thrilled to tell you that I’ve just been offered a wonderfully ‘legit’ publishing deal from a small, well-established Canadian publisher… My re-titled Faith in a Fishbowl should be in print within a few months. Congrats on another mentoring success!” – Jerry Rose, inspirational book author
“Received a book contract today… I am still a bit too shocked to believe it! Also, I wanted to thank you for the suggestions you gave pertaining to the book. Although at first I felt a little ‘protective’ (euphemism J) and only wanted to hear ‘good’ things, when I looked at your comments objectively I saw the great merit in them. I referred to your comments many times in my re-editing process and each time found them very helpful. Thanks!” – Jessica Whittemore, author, Even in Darcey
“Mark, you did it again! You’re the best editor I have ever had the pleasure to work with. It’s indeed an experience and a journey of enlightenment writing with you.” – Robby G. Dixon, author, educator, motivational speaker.
“Writers’ egos, I’m finding out, are very fragile. You have a way about you that’s very soothing on my fragile ego; while you teach and correct the work, you never forget the writer, and that’s a gift. I know you’ve helped me through a lot, and I will tell you honestly: Without your guidance, friendship and patience, I would still be writing only for myself; I’d never have had the guts to take it this far.” – Petra Ruck, fantasy novelist
“Last month I contacted (on your recommendation) my favorite best-selling author via e-mail to ask if she’d mind forwarding information about her agent to me. She didn’t mind, and her agent requested a sample of my work, liked it very much, and now wants to see the full manuscript. Exciting stuff. You should know, too, that part of the sample I sent him was the first chapter, rewritten per your suggestions. (You’re brilliant!) I’ll keep you posted.” – Kathryn Cruise, author, Self-Care Advisor [Ms. Cruise has since secured agent representation for her historical novel.]
“Mark was awesome! Always went the second mile, had great ideas and vastly improved the manuscript.” Later: “Good news: The Tulsa literary agent has begun to shop Beyond Self-Help. Florida-based Strang Communications (Chicken Soup for the Soul series) was one of his first two contacts. The Strang editor responded yesterday, indicating a readiness to negotiate the publishing rights to this book (which she called ‘important’) PLUS my previous, self-published books. Not saying they’re the one, but they perhaps are a good litmus test.” – Cecil Kemp, inspirational author
“Mark had a remarkable way of grasping the conceptual framework of my book as a whole and relating his grasp to every chapter, paragraph and sentence, so his suggestions had significant impacts on the clarity of the entire work. He pointed out areas where adding a brief sentence or clarifying a detail had major affects on the reader’s overall understanding, as well as noticing things that didn’t work. One seemingly simple idea of his had a dramatic impact on the entire book’s readability, as all others I’ve trusted to review the work in progress have concurred. His touch was never intrusive, yet some of his observations and suggestions were so perfect, they at times made me feel as if they’d come from a co-author of my book.” – Mitchell Kalish, New Age/Native American spirituality author
“Update: You helped me learn special techniques for querying publishing house editors directly. I’ve used these methods twice and both times gotten a quick response for manuscript pages. I call that effectiveness and thank you for it. Now I’m thinking I should make sure my ms. is perfect before submitting it to more editors. So I’m considering engaging you for a full edit (developmental, line-by-line, copy editing) of my 104,000-word heroic fantasy novel.” – Alan Marling, sword-and-sorcery, fantasy author
“Thanks for all your hard work editing the book and ‘coaching’ me; you helped polish this material from a piece of coal to a precious stone.” – Grant Trevithick, author, Quantum Spirituality
“Sacred Seduction has been released to rave reviews, and I am very happy. Your bracketed comments especially [on the ms.-in-progress] were particularly interesting and helpful. And I could see that you didn’t change my ‘voice’ in your editing.” – Bisi J. Ojediran, novelist, Director, Shell Oil Communications, Nigeria
“A very special thanks to my mentor, Mark Orrin, for not only his passionate editorial input, but also for his steadfast personal love and care.” – Joy Sawyer, author, The Art of the Soul, Dancing to the Heartbeat of Redemption, poet, national poetry therapy leader
“If you hadn’t called me… back in ’91, who knows what turns my life might have taken? Different and far less exciting, that’s for sure. Thanks for being such a faithful friend and mentor. I appreciate you immensely.” – Mark Olsen, novelist, essayist, scriptwriter
“Throughout our work and rework on my manuscript, Mark Orrin was encouraging and kind, and he never made me feel like the rookie I am (was). He never left me feeling like he knew more about the publishing industry than I did – he just continued to teach me in an incredibly thoughtful and gentle way, fine-tuning my work and imploring me to be the best I could be. I told him last week: Even if I never get published, I’ll still feel that the money I spent to work with Mr. Orrin was money well spent. I want all to know that I had a wonderful experience throughout the road Mr. Orrin and I traveled together. I’ll certainly call upon him for my next project. [And later]… I have been aggressively contacting agencies and publishers and need some advice. At the moment there are ten agencies and two publishers who have responded favorably to my query (which you taught me how to write, I might add) about my novel, The Hole to China. If one or more of these responders happen to be interested enough to ask me to contract with them, how should I handle this?” – Gary Kaschak, author
“You’ve excelled yourself; the query/proposal is brilliant. Mark, I am so glad that I picked you. You have shown amazing expertise, in re-ordering my words to make more sense of them, and in showing such empathy for what I’m trying to achieve. I don’t know how to thank you for all your hard work, and I hope this is not the end of our business relationship.” – Mim McKew, Australian memoirist
“Thank you for your masterful work [on a controversial 'non-fiction novel' project]. Hope you are as pleased with the finished product as we are.” – Robert Davies, senior editor, author
“Mark Orrin’s evaluation of my ms. has been extremely helpful to me and much needed. With his guidance and expertise, I feel much more confident in wrapping up my ‘story.’ It has been a pleasure to work with Mark, and I will continue to do so.” – Bonnie Ward, memoirist
“I’ve secured representation for Sublime. My agent took my mini-proposal to a conference recently, and the editors of five houses asked to see the full proposal… Keep your fingers crossed.” – John Riggs, Ph.D., author-educator
Hi, Nick~ I don’t know if you remember me You did an evaluation on my book. You helped me with my chapter synopses. Anyway, I finally signed a contract and am getting it published with Two Harbors Press. I wanted to acknowledge you and make sure it was okay with you.” (On file with network coordinator)